B8te

you can just use chatgpt nowadays to improve your writing

bro dont even have english as main language

thx man

thx for reading

The story is ok, because it feels poorly written dude to lack of lexical words. Author copy past the novel in gpt and tell it to make it better. I do the same thing.

Good story, the character are well made, also there are no lot of holes, I can see that the story have lot of potential. I can't wait too see out the future chapters

this is not halal

A really good story, I don't find many typos and also the grammer is good, Hope that the author keeps the story interesting as it is now in the future.

nice story dude

Im sure I checked if there are any typos, Idk where that is..