sucroseliker

This is demon slayer. Magic, dude.

WN took it down the first time dk why

spoiler: Mondstatd is only a first arc location

taking a break right now unfortunately.

Alright listen up. I don't understand why you people are arguing under a fanfiction I'm only writing to pass time, to me it just seems funny. I've said this before, but if you don't want to read a story with a female gender bent MC, that's fine, but don't take time out of your limited lifespan to argue over it, either read it, or don't, it's really not that serious. Please behave, thank you.

I didn't really show anything about him yet though. I purposefully left out Naoko's characterization as the first 10 or so chapters really don't focus on her as much as they focus on other characters. That's why she's mostly in the background for most scenes except for maybe the latest fight where I showed off the frenzy aspect of her character. Maybe it was weird to do it like that though, so yea, if it feels wrong, that's totally understandable. I did slightly tease at his character in the prologue though so I thought it wouldn't be that out of left field, but again, maybe I'm wrong.

As in, it doesn't work within the confines of this story or just doesn't work in general? I personally feel like it's an interesting ethical dilemma, not every person in his situation will act like him. I got the idea for his character after watching an interview with a British armed forces sniper. If you don't know the story, he is considered to be one of the best snipers in the world, even having the world record for the farthest kill ever made. However, despite his apparent fame, he is a man who is very clearly torn apart by what he did, to the point where even after he retired, what he did all those years ago still affects his life and relationships. I don't know, you might see it differently, but I feel like not everyone can just adapt to killing people without it affecting their psyche. Sure, there are some people who might, but not everyone.

And some people may not like that it doesn't advance the plot so they can skip it.

Huh? No, it's important for characterization but I'm just saying that it won't advance the plot of the main story. Plus I wanted to write a backstory

That's where I got that from.