moocifer

I'm here on my soap box again to reluctantly report I have since dropped this novel since my last review. After Razeal met with Nova again because of Riven, and seeing her get rejected so blatantly again, I found no more motivation to continue to read and wait for daily updates. I will be picking this back up once the story has reached its completion, but the constant rejection the people around him face has just become to unenjoyable for me. The fight with Celestia and Selena was great. Seeing Razeal preach to them, and seeing true regret fill them was great. But the rejection against Nova simply was not a fun read. While I don’t believe he is incorrect for doing such a thing, my first priority is to enjoy the novel I’m reading, and I simply don’t enjoy it anymore While l'd still like to believe there will be a time for forgiveness, and that Razeal deserves to be angry at the people who have done him wrong, it is not fun to see him perpetually keep people away from him all the time without even a hint or sign of some sort of development. I’d like to believe the author plans on a forgiveness arc, and that’s what kept me reading. But if the final plan is for Razeal to continue to hate everyone who did him wrong, which it feel like it’s been teed up as such, then I will not be reading this any longer. While I think this story will have plenty of merits if the author wishes to keep Razeal hating everyone, it is no longer the story for me. I wish it only turned out differently.

This is a phenomal novel so far and I hope the author keeps up a similar standard of writing going forward. First, Leo feels real. Like an actual human. I’m tired of an edgy, lone wolf coded MC who it to busy being a tsundere to the people around him. Leo cares. Expresses his love to the people he cares about. Wants to be better. Strives for it almost to a desperate level. It feels so human and real. He’s not a self sacrificing hero, but he’s not a cold edgelord either. He gives his care to a select few and gives a lot. His progress is slow but I think that’s important. He’s not perfect, but he’s someone who wants to be a better version of himself when he wakes up everyday and I think that’s beautiful and an excellent choice by the author. I’ve also been seeing some complainants about the pacing. I think the writing is a little repetitive at times. Certain lines or quotes that are reused multiple times in one chapter, but nothing to write home about or call atrocious. I think it’s also interesting to see the author give so much time and care into individual characters. I saw a comment hating on the Roran backstory chapters and I could only think that people are just impatient and want an OP MC quickly. It was a compelling story, something worth reading, and gives Roran so much more depth than just “Drunken Master”. Now I don’t think the author should do this TOO much. Over exposition can definitly kill this novels readability, but it’s much to earlier to be complaining now. Overall I think this novel has some amazing potential and I will be comitting it to my daily reads. I will update a review again at a later date.

He hasn’t been this crazy about murdering a single being ina fight since daeron. Funny how the TOA drives this man to new levels of spite lol

This was a good chapter for Celestia and Selena. I’m interested to see how Razeal reacts to this. I’m sure most readers would disagree, but their character flaws have been in the spotlight for the entire novel, and now to see them in a different light is nice. A girl blinded by love and one by pride and duty. It doesn’t excuse them, but I think after this chapter to see them as irredeemable could be harsh. But maybe I’m just partial to redemption 🤷‍♂️

Same outfits during the third nightmare. Cute callback

I understand the author is trying to paint Selena in a tragic light. But it just doesn’t work here. We’ve spent to much of the story hating her, and now we’re met with this whiplash of a chapter. Where she loves him so much, yada yada yada. I get it, and I think it’s a good idea to redeem people tha wronged Razeal. But this is just too much to quickly.

Hello readers! First off, thank you for picking up this novel. I've been reading webnovels since 2020, and thought that it was high time I give writting one a shot. I've never written something of this magnitude before, and my expectations are incredibly low. This is a passion project of mine, and I will continue writing regardless of how the support goes. I want this novel to be a love child of all of my favorite references and tropes from my favorite media. There will be plenty of references, and I take a lot of inspiration from several sources. The plot itself will be very loosely based on my favorite game, which I am interested to see if readers pick up :). I also love JJK, so there will be some thematic similarities with it as well. Beyond that, I am a vampire fanboy. I love the trope and will always read and write about it. More information about the world will be revealed as the story progresses. If I am referencing things and not explaining them, please be patient; I will get to them. While my expectations are low, I plan to have this be a pretty long-running novel. I have big plans and want to see them come true, so please support this work if you like it!! Also, please leave reviews. If you hate the story, then let me know! I'm not here to please everyone, but I hope my fans will be as committed to Cyrn's adventure in Telvaros as I am. Much love, everyone, and let's hope for the best!!! Sincerely, Moocifer

Since his talks with Zara and Tongue I’d agree there’s not MUCH difference. But relapse is part of recovery. It’s unrealistic to expect him to have a eureka moment and suddenly switch as a character. He’s been harboring hatred for YEARS and a few hours talking with people are supposed to suddenly change him. Just makes no sense.

At worst this novel is over the top exposition with some sketchy grammar and spelling. At best this is an emotional rollercoster. Excellent drama, plot, character development, power system, and a unique system premis as well. Razeal is believably naïve, and he acts in a way that is believable for a 17 year old. People call him stupid, frustrating, and stubborn but idk many 17 year olds that aren’t. He’s had great character development over all the chapters, and we can see actual progress between the 1 chapter in his outlook on his life, but he still has a great ways to go, and I can see the author teeing up his development. Every side character has stakes and are characters I actually enjoy reading about. One of the only novels where I look forward to a POV switch. The development of Razeals truth coming out as well is great. It’s been a slow but satisfying burn, and his betrayers are complex enough that they aren’t just 1 dimensional evil plot devices. Above all else this is just f***king cool. Author isn’t doing anything super unique, but the tropes he’s decided to use and how he’s using them are excellent and supremely entertaining. The first ten chapters are rough in fairness, and again at worst there’s a LOT of exposition that I think can definitly be shortened down. But those are the only major flaws I’m having with this novel. Please read it it’s one of the better pieces that are on this app. And author, please updated more! I’m on the edge of my seating waiting for razeal to go back to the empire!!!

I was honestly enjoying this until the torture. Not for the depiction of the torture itself but the aftermath of Noah's character. Author spend 70+ chapters building up Noah's character and his relationships with other characters only to throw it all away and make him some 1 dimensional destruction maniac. If you like that kind of subversion then go and read but personally I think the handling of Noah's character after chapter 80 or so is just horrendous. I liked discount Gojo, I liked Juniper, I liked Cecilia, and author just threw out 70+ chapter of relationship building for discount Fang Yuan. Nope for me.