please rate my very first book, rate it, I don't care how harsh you're review will be, I want to learn from my mistakes so please review my book, the harsher the better and please tell me the problems if there is that is

all jokes aside, for real ? Uranus is that big ? boi

nice tactics because if I was the enemy I would literally LUAGH to death

bro you fed someone poison and they still stand, I WOULD DO THE SAME THING THEY DID BUT ID THROW THE BODY TO A HOT BOILING LAVA

oh god my childhood

this one does not honor bro code,

wallet:

bro hahahahahahahauaua