69_master

story is good. enjoying it so far but author can you please tone down the smirking part a little and use some synonyms in it's place it will boost your vocabulary.

the story is just like it's title - third rate "well what do you expect from a third rate writer" . I mean person with negative iq will write such 2d story heck even hentai has better story than this.

this guy is illiterate

someone give this illiterate man an elementary maths book

then by what Otherworldly logic does being a 2nd child help live a lazy life "dear author"

so thats how chinese get married hu

engleesh

so it's an abandoned hospital right? since no one came ever after hearing the scream?

waaah! waaah! I am not able to use my abilities because I am not able to handle mana !! waah!!waah!!!!

a person who can't even walk properly is riding a bike at 200kmph . someone sure misplaced his thinking capabilities