Great work! I love how every character is unique and you made it your own. There are a few grammar mistakes but overall the story is really good. Keep it up!

I don't know how to reach everyone so this seemed fair. Thank you to everyone for the kind words who have read House of Shadow and hopefully will continue to read it. It's greatly appreciated and keeps me going. Thank you!

Thank you!!

So far I’ve read all the free chapters and it’s really good. For me it started off slow but nothing to draw my attention away. I’m not to big on romance but after reading some of it, it hooks you in. Keep up the good work.

Yeah sooo this is amazing. I‘M not too big on romances but this is my cup of tea. The character are great and the world is great. I love this!

It is pretty good. It definitely catches your attention. I look forward to more and seeing where you go with Dante. Keep up the good work![img=recommend]

I'm not much of a romance reader but this one, I liked it. I didn't catch up fully yet but I intend soon. It was great pacing and intense. Definitely worth the read and I'll be adding to my collection.

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Overall, this was a pretty good piece of work. I did enjoy reading this. There are some grammatical errors but nothing to throw off the story. Keep writing please, I'm definitely following.

The story is good. There are some grammatical errors but overall the plot is interesting. I enjoy it for the most park. The no quotation marks is different but it works. Overall, good work

Not a bad piece of work but not entirely great. You need to work better on the flow of things and grammar. The plot is interesting and I get where you're going with it. Don't give up on this, there is potential in this. Keep going!

I’m not much of a system reader but this one is really good. I enjoy the plot and I’ll continue reading more when published. Could use some editing but overall good job man!

Just finished reading the free chapters and it is a great original novel. I wasn't sure what to expect but i really enjoyed it. Overall great plot and good writing! Keep it up

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback! It is greatly appreciated!

Thank you to everyone who reads this. I really appreciate all feedback. I hope you enjoy HOB! I'll continue to improve on everything so thank you!!

This is actually great. I enjoy this so much. I can see this is something you worked hard on and it really shows. Keep up the good work and I hope you continue working hard

I added to my library. I definitely like the direction this is going. I look forward to much more especially where she goes in her new position. Keep up the good work author!

*Break ties instead of broke ties.

I enjoyed it. The writing can be improved on but overall the chapters I read are great. I look forward to where this story goes. I'm definitely adding to my library to read more. Great job!

I really loving this. I'm not being biased when I say this is a really great novel and I am definitely waiting for more to come. Keep up the good work