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she already had* Or so i think.
I think ot will be beyter if you focus on the Mc’s name. Sometimes you bring it as “Yechen”, it’s better to be “Ye Chen”, more comfortable and smoother in the sentence.
Bit of both is good, and i think you could work some more on the smut chapters and story progression. Let it be more solid.
The legendary inverted nip*les!!
😂🤣😂🤣
Small details are for you to do, since it's your novel, but me i, personally, don't like yuri, yaoi or things alike. I prefer the heroines being devoted to the MC alone and don't have intimacy high level of skinship and so. I like when the MC's women just think and have eyes for him alone, and being intimate with just him. I won't say just virgins, NTR(netori to be spicefic) milfs, even incest. I don't mind any of those as long as the things above are there. "and sorry for bullshiting too much"
Blowy
Confirm*
An* impulsive
I would love such interactions with other girls too.
Doted on her* the most
Another way to not sat a scum