KetchupxD
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KetchupxD1mthKommentiertCh 1 Blood-Soaked Cultivator (1)- KetchupxD1mthKommentiertCh 1 Blood-Soaked Cultivator (1)
- KetchupxD2mthAntwortet auf UnenlightenedOne
Thank you for pointing that out! I never really realised I wrote that there xD
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - KetchupxD3mthAntwortet auf Jingle303
- KetchupxD3mthVerschickt
Here's my honest review. The way you explain stuff, Great! But I would recommend reviewing ur chapters before uploading bcoz no one wants to read stuff with bad grammar right? And if English isn't your primary language I would suggest Grammarly or Quillbot. They really help with that. Hope you can become a sucessful fanfic author! 😊 (Altho I haven't become one yet 😆)
- KetchupxD3mthKommentiert
ooo
Sadly there conversations ended there as Inko barge in midoria's room. After izuku yell she stop cooking mid way and check on her son. The door was half open as she looked through the door. The dark room plus the soft light of the computer made catnap invisible to her as her only focus was her soon. - KetchupxD3mthKommentiert
Ayo you'll miss all mights quirk mate
" WOW! AMAZING A-ARE YOU MY QUIRK!? " - KetchupxD3mthKommentiert
typical midoriya
Midoria said to inko as he closed the door of his room while grabbing his allmight action figure. He was initially planning to rewatch all might beating some villains at the new's again as one moment made him filled thrilled and goosebumps as he walk towards his computer suddenly he noticed something. - KetchupxD3mthKommentiert
1 suggestion that has been passed down to me by experienced writers -shorten the paras as much as possible max 4-5 lines.
The metallic yet skinny bone like arm reach towards catnap like god reaching out to him as the closer he gets the more joy he felt as with one last move the prototype thrust it's sharp knife hand's through catnaps ever smiling mouth. his mouth gushed in blood as catnaps eyes we're widen by how sudden the attack we're be.He felt pain that he couldn't thought would happen to him. not the pain of his head pierce through his spine but the sudden betrayal did the prototype did. Catnap couldn't believe it NO! He refuse to believe it but the pain from his mouth as well as his eyes blurred by the sight of the prototype's hand made him see the world slowly with dim light. - KetchupxD5mthAntwortet auf Freyr4Frost
- KetchupxD5mthKommentiertDieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
- KetchupxD5mthKommentiertCh 1 Fluffy Sleepyhead
- KetchupxD5mthKommentiert
Damn stalker. Anyways I just had to ask it but give my book a review too, it won't disappoint😁
From being deskmates to working together on almost every other project, we had both grown fond of each other. I was pretty much aware of all Aerum's likes, dislikes and also her taste in men. She was nothing less, she was the first of the many few who knew about my relationship with Joon Woo. - KetchupxD5mthKommentiert
did he perphaps fight with some demon king
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - KetchupxD5mthKommentiert
fluffy? already triggering my senses hehe
"You can wake up now, fluffy sleepyhead." - KetchupxD5mthKommentiert
Dem can I have her instead Joon Woo?
Yuri's heart swelled with happiness, knowing that she had found something special with Joon Woo. "I never believed in love at first sight until I met you," she confessed, her eyes reflecting the shimmering stars above. "You're like a dream I never want to wake up from." - KetchupxD5mthKommentiert
Ooo
Yuri walked over to where her boyfriend sat working on his laptop, putting the device aside as she sat on his lap comforting herself in his warm embrace. "I want us to travel together, well, it's alright. I will ask Aerum if she is free this week"