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finally an amazing Snape fic where the story's focus is on the hp world and is not mixed with other works, writing quality, world background, story development, and character design are all amazing.
what's the og name and author?
fck no
this is absolutely amazing the writing and grammar can Improve but overall it's really good, I just wish you don't make the mc a pushover
don't make the mc a fucking boy scout, nobody likes boy scouts, right now after killing the demons the mc needs to asert dominance, beat the shit out of both Constantine and raven(raven not too much) got to the tower grind shadow soldiers, so that when the titans or justice league come looking he can stand his ground also thx for the chapter
they need an ass whooping, don't make the mc a little bitch, after he comes back raven, Constantine should get kick back, although raven is the number 1 best dc girl im sorry but she needs to get her ass kicked, also make sure to power up the mc during the kidnaping, also thx for chapter
one of the best cyberpunk fanfics II'v ever read, everything is amazing just keep up the good work and don't drop author