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Is author actively skipped plot when fighting happens

Why does orochimaru wants to develop snake jutsu even when there better alternatives

Okay it's really getting annoying why does he wants to be in war he has no interest in anything. Mc is bland

Well he could have tried to save some childrens or other who will not be targeted immediately, even if he didn't know the exact timing making preparations would have way better than this

Okay I hate this mc lived practically 3 lives worth of time, even if 2 are from simulation. And he was supposed to be someone who understands human nature and can manipulate it, why the fu*k is acting like a dumb cultivation sword master who hates women and refuses to understand their feelings

Its so stupid, mc just made up a story about his poor background and lack of knowledge. And still trying to impart Meta knowledge, and how the does that piece of information would even work for ning rongrong. when her marital soul have fixed skills no matter which spirit rings she chooses

Although story is silly and mc is brain dead retard, atleast it was funny and translation was good. But later chapters become horrible to even read. Author should work more on translation

Well it's a easy thing to say I mean if you are in that world with plot knowledge and it's secret and have no power than, becoming rias "slave" is more appropriate than running around like and idiot or hiding faraway safe place, well that will not make a good story. And let's be honest here becoming immortal with magic which can be used according to your imagination and being able build your own peerage after becoming high class devil is better in my opinion even if I have to work some years under devil princess who treats you way better than other people. And if you think you can get sacred gear and remain independent well that would be hella difficult since every faction would want to join them or remove you

Will his life dictated by system from now on.

So mc will be another issei but a copycat, he will not use his system to do anything other just follow cannon, no wonder he was a loser atleast issei has dreams and did things his own way.