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Depends on what you have to say. If you want to tell me there is a grammar mistake, I'm happy to make a note of it and fix it. If you want to point out that the measurements are odd, I've already changed that in the mastercopy and just haven't gotten around to fixing things here. If the descriptions of the dungeon layout is too confusing, I have dungeon maps I've created, but you have to go to Discord or read somewhere like RoyalRoad to see them. If you want to suggest something else like skills or potential future challenges, you can do that as much as you want, just don't expect it to show up anytime soon, if at all. I am already on the eighth floor on the Patreon, so the chapters here are a bit behind.

No, you didn't misunderstand the text. I might have to include a line about it, but Violet is choosing not to tell Theodore the necromancer's name on purpose. He is just saying it would be difficult from his end because he doesn't have a body to identify. In the diary version, Violet reflects on the fact that she doesn't want the necromancer's family to suffer because she remembers that Theodore says Alice could suffer from her father's actions towards her.

I already replied to your review, but I'll reply here as well. I apologize for the repeitiveness. The world's setting is a medieval magic setting and books are really rare. It's actually a plot point later on where Violet really wants books, but they are too expensive and rare, so it's a really difficult thing to manage.

It's set in a medieval magic setting so books are really rare. It's actually a plot point in later volumes where Violet keeps asking people for books only to be told that it's not possible.

Thank you

Ice cream would melt before it left the dungeon and most adventurers like the versatility of things they can take with them and use or sell at a later time.

XD That's certainly an idea, but the core is already semi-sentient, it just interacts via the system menu and acts more like a computer program than an actual person functionally. I have no plans to bring Lee into the story in any officially capacity, but there is a part in volume three that is similar to that. I know a lot of romantics really want Violet to have a happy ending on her love story, but this is a tragedy, not a romance, as sad as that is.

thank you, I'll take a look at it the next time I do a mass edit of the master copy.

Sorry for the lack of reply. I really hate WebNovel's platform. I consistently update this story on Wattpad and RoyalRoad and the first volume is completed for this story on both. On my Patreon, it is currently in its third volume, so I have been consistently working on it, just not here.

I release free chapters faster on RoyalRoad and Wattpad where I post a free chapter every Friday, but I just post here en masse every few weeks / months. For fastest, fastest updates, my Patreon gets 5x new chapters / week and is already 16 chapters ahead of everywhere else.WebNovel isn't the best place for organic views, even on free stories, so it rarely matters if it isn't up to date with everywhere else.