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It has potential. I hope you we'll give it your all

no heram please🙏 just one female lead. ps you already messed up the timeline. Most women in one piece from the main timeline are, two young for him now now if you want a female lead, you have to create one

no heram please 🙏 just one female lead. ps you already messed up the timeline.Most women in one piece from the main timeline are , two young for him now now if you want a female lead, you have to create one

I couldn't find a place to write this on your patreon, so I'm writing it here. I noticed the timeline is different from the original d O'Hara.Incident happened the same year ace was born it's the main reason Garp wasn't able to interfere personally, I'm writing this because I don't think Yamato should be a love interest.There is the age gap and with Hancock, the main character is a family man. He loves his family and seeing that he has a good death on the original story. Knowing that Yamato and ace had a good relationship.I don't think he'd want to interfere with them same with Hancock and luffy, I don't think he'd take someone that Love is a little brother so much he knew that luffy isn't idiot so someone willing to love luffy through that something he rather happened.

robin

when will mewtwo be able to use ice type abilities or other he use fire punch thunder punch but no ice punch

How can I lie? It's a great story. However, in your character's backstory, he has a deep friendship with kagaya, so will kagaya be the love interest, or will he ever free her from her imprisonment or what? You can't just say that they're good friends in his backstory, and for his whole, reason to leave was to find her and yet not free her it feels like a big loophole. Since he should have the power to free her already and doesn't need to wait for anything or anyone.

If we're talking about hit time skip, I believe that's a racial ability and yes, with enough power, you can suppress some hacks, but at the same time someone has weake as bobbity. Was able to control someone second only to beers the destroyer. majin boo was able to turn vegeto into candy. even though he was weaker. That shows no matter how powerful your key is or body. With a strong enough spell you can be defeated even in dragon ball dimaima , the man who created the dragon ball multiverse used magic. even when goku and vegeta went to the demon realm. The demons didn't know what kai was. or how to use it. It shows that kai came to much later down the line. Your welcome look up the time magic came up in dragon Ball.

That was a great chapter. I just have one question. Has the black dragon been weakened during his travel to the dragon ball world? I'm asking because it took zerf gaining the power to rewrite the time line. of the entire universe. Giving him the confidence to face the black dragon. P s most dragon ball characters , whether it is dragon ball,dragon ball Z, dragon ball GT, dragon ball Dima, dragon ball Super. Have no magical resistance or very little. Take the fight between vegeto and boohan or the dragon balls how they were able to turn the Z fighters into children without any resistance. Most hacks from dragon ball are magic.

Why is it always gender swap?............