Sn1z

Honestly I stopped reading when I saw there was 0 spacing, the text is bolded black which makes it so you can barely see unless you have Light Mode on, everything is just jumbled togather so you can’t tell the difference between a new event or old, and wether it’s one person talking or the other

Where is it

This foreshadowing is alittle too obvious

Fit?

Marvel

Alittle???

English?!!?!

I give this a low score just because it got to emo for me like it was fine for awhile, the mc being a regular lobar in a class but it immediately went to “staring at the darkness” and that just ruined my immersion, but besides that it was a good start idk abt the rest

Honestly dropped it for the same reason also more to the fact that he immediately went on to convince the villain to basically help the city instead of being hero or villain just too overused in my opinion

Herb said,