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Ferzd

Ferzd

Lv4
2022-06-16 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd10d
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    I think Noiborn looks cool and all but I have never found a use for it. There are always better alternatives. I guess it works for hardcore nuzlockes. For a flying dragon, it's very underwhelming.

    A young man with gray hair smashed into the ground along with a massive creature, covered in blood. The Gray haired boy cried out, "Noivern, Boomburst!" 
    Pokemon- World's 'Strongest' Trainer
    Anime und Comics · AgentMonke
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd13d
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    Well technically, the fastest animal is a human in a jet plane. Just goes to show how dominant humans actually are and how op intelligence is in the real world... Anyways, loving the story so far.

    The Peregrine Falcon.
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd19d
    Verschickt

    Damn, this is probably the best novel I have read on webnovel. I was skeptical at first since the title was pretty eh and the synopsis was generic but damn I was pleasantly surprised. Good points: The MC is multidimensional. (Which is extremely rare in this platform) The writing quality is phenomenal. The writing felt very immersive and hit the emotional beats pretty well. But by far the best point about this novel is how this novel takles emotions and how it explores them. Many authors especially in the fantasy genre tend to stay away from emotions as they are hard to write and make the main character look weak and "beta" to the edgy teenagers that make up the majority of demographic. This story does the opposite and explores emotions and memories in a very interesting way. Bad points: The magic system is generic. It's not awful but it certainly isn't something too interesting too think about. The world itself is also pretty meh. (Of course this may change since this story is still pretty new.) But as of chapter 162~ the world doesn't feel that unique from many other modern-medieval fantasy stories. I think a little bit more world building would be better but then again it's not a story about the world but the characters so this point is not very important. ... Now some other miscellaneous points: 1)Your previous book TAPOV was.. in the nicest way I can put this.. not that good. The characters were very bland and boring. But this story has decent character writing and good dialogue it's a huge improvement from the previous one. 2) Correct me if I am wrong but I think you took inspiration from "SSS class suicide hunter". Especially the tragic beats of the story are written in a somewhat similar way to it. This is in no way a complaint as I think it's done amazingly. It's just an observation. ... In conclusion, I think this story has a great story, decent characters, a likeable protagonist and alot of potential. World building and magic systems could be improved upon by making it more nuanced but that's not that big of a problem. I think the story has fantastic pacing and overall is a really fun read. I am curious where you take this. Thank you for writing, author. I hope you excel. ... 8.5/10. Love it.

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    Fantasie · Entrail_JI
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd23d
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    Seriously speaking, Don't try this at home. You will fall down and fracture your skull if you're unlucky.

    The hardest of all was the one that consisted of walking down the stairs using the hands instead of the feet. It might seem simple at first, and so I had thought the first time he had told me to do it. But in reality, walking down the stairs using your hands was actually an extremely extenuating training for your whole body. 
    Sussy Baka in MHA
    Anime und Comics · The_Synonym
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd23d
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    That's deep. Such profound wisdom. Maybe god was an imposter all along. Such deep thinking that could make Aristotle tremble. As Sun Tsu once said, "God is Among us."

    '... Wait... Don't tell me that God was an Impostor all along?!!!'
    Sussy Baka in MHA
    Anime und Comics · The_Synonym
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd23d
    Kommentiert

    Should've called it Imposter

    『Shapeshift』:
    Sussy Baka in MHA
    Anime und Comics · The_Synonym
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd23d
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    If only circuit diagrams were so simple irl

    But Lynn was different. Having successfully grasped the concept of the alchemy array as a Muggle circuit diagram, he saw the array not as thousands of complex forms, but simply as two basic configurations: series and parallel connections. This understanding simplified the learning process immensely.
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    Bücher und Literatur · electronatom
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd23d
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    I think playing Japanese songs makes more sense since they are in Japan.

    Ch 5 First Stream
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    Anime und Comics · SoyNiir
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd23d
    Antwortet auf Ferzd

    I like your taste tho

    (-Coyote Theory / This Side of Paradise-)
    MHA: The Musician
    Anime und Comics · SoyNiir
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd23d
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    Bruh, very strange song for a 4 year old to sing

    (-Coyote Theory / This Side of Paradise-)
    MHA: The Musician
    Anime und Comics · SoyNiir
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd23d
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    Interesting taste

    His fingers moved quickly, searching for Shiloh Dynasty, XXXTentacion, Laufey, Joji, dv4d, Rex Orange County, Bruno Mars, Neon Trees, Ricky Montgomery...
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd24d
    Antwortet auf Sir_Squirrel

    Also, I hope I don't sound rude, I am not trying to be, It's not everyday i get to talk about Political systems especially in webnovel of all places.

    "Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd24d
    Antwortet auf

    Denmark is a constitutional monarchy basically democracy with a mascot

    "Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd24d
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    So you're basically saying monarchy is better than democracy instead a many dozen flawed humans running the country you will rather give all the power to fewer people with no social mobility and limit the political power to blood?

    "Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd24d
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    UAE, Qatar, etc are rich because resources and low population, their government has fuck all to do with it.

    "Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd24d
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    Roman empire was originally a republic and the moment it got a emperor few emperor's later it collapsed ever heard of the third century crisis?

    "Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd24d
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    Bruh, England was a terrible place to live for anyone not of the upper class or do you think you will be of the upper class?, the Ottoman empire was fine but a system like that wouldn't work in the modern day.

    "Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd25d
    Antwortet auf Sir_Squirrel

    If you genuinely don't think democracy isn't the best of government you've always lived in a democracy and took it's benefits for granted while only looking at it's flaws, Lived in a dictatorship and that's all you know, want a theocracy cause you're extremely religious, live in a country pretending to be a democracy while not being one, you're equating the flaws of capitalism to democracy, too young to think about politics and say what your parents say, or simply politically illiterate.

    "Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd25d
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    Such as Dictatorship, Absolute Monarchy, Aristocracy, or Gang rule?

    "Nah, forget about it." I said with a shrug. The idea of democracy or something similar would be too foreign for them. It was a bad idea.
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Ferzd
    Ferzd26d
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    That's actually very smart. Wait, since the king is a bird and Shen is a bird wouldn't it be wise for him to offer his daughter to Shen that way it would be his blood in the throne. But would Shen agree to this? I mean, it doesn't sound like a bad plan. Bird + Bird = Another Bird?

    "Oh well, too bad then." The king of Nanzhao, a golden pheasant said. "I would have preferred forming an alliance with you two instead of surrendering to Shen and Tai Lung."
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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