novelconsumer

Well I'll be damned, and I do apologise for spreading misinformation

Wooo!!! some romance, yay

plz let it be of any semblance to the ability of speaking; since the wolf thing was growling and making sounds it would kinda make sense...

The beginning is a great example of creating intrigue to prompt readers continue to do what they do best, aka read; the world being Frieren is greatly appreciated by me as there are only a few fanfics situated in the world of Frieren worth reading; while the main character being a person who reincarnated as a demon is not unique, similar to most if not all frieren fanfictions. It isn't a bad thing; on the contrary I think the mc being a reincarnator is done well with clear thought put into them; them not remember who they are with the fact that there exists a duality with her past humanity and her current demon self. This is shown in her clear lack of emotion even though she feels like she should have some. All in all the mc is one of the most well though out ones I have seen from any Frieren fanfic and clearly is a unique persona, and not just another carbon copy of your generic isekai protagonist. I can not talk much about the story since there exists only a single chapter, at the time of me leaving this review, but I think that there will be many exciting moments within the story as time passes. The language and spelling of the novel is of great quality, but in my opinion it suffers slightly from overuse of complicated sentences and words; this creates slightly harder to comprehend language than what I would prefer from a webnovel. All things taken into consideration this is a novel with great potential and possibilities for the future. review by a rampant fanfic consumer.

Undefeated King Madra, huh; I haven't heard that name in a while...

He did though...

I hummed the part to the tune of barbie girl, anyone else?

yeah thought that to be the case by a peek in th dc but had to fullfill the obligation of complaining lol

the eternal problem of a reader strikes again; I need more chapters...

tftc, but also have to say that this novel is really good, and is pretty much exactly the style I like, normally I dont really like MHA but this novel with its total disconnection (at least so far) of the events of the series proves to be really good and represents one of the best (imo) fanfic categories, I enjoy other categories too but I like this kind of disconnected style especially. Though I wouldnt mind a dabble with the main cast or even a full on academy arc, at least if the quality stays constant while stearing clear of a hyperfocus on 'normal academy life, with nothing weird going on' or messing with Tiffanys character. I personally think that she needs some growth in a healthy direction (friends, familial love, etc.) And people outside of her circle of abused beneficiaries. Also I think that I'd like the story going more into the shrewd business world, while balancing it with what I mentioned before could prove difficult I think that with everything in moderation things should turn out good.. But who am I to plan things for a novel that isnt written by me... ps. I hope my headcanon dump was at least helpfull in some way lol.