I reviewed this when it was around f 3 chapters long, I previously gave it five stars thinking it had an interesting concept. But reading it now it is just a carbon copy of the original just with some minor changes that aren't relevant. There are some plotholes as well. Bit disappointed, expected a lot from this fic and the author. Maybe a rewrite could fix it but with the way it is, I don't recommend anyone to read this. Just watch the original, it is better.

Because I have a memory of a goldfish I have no recollection of why I dropped the previous iteration. I believe it was due to the pacing. Slow burn is nice and all but a healthy balance is needed for it to be equally engaging. I'm enjoying the current work very much. Just wished I discovered it a bit later so there would be more to read.

Can anyone tell me why Ed's dad can't recognise him? From the voice to his face? He's wearing a Harry Potter costume right?

it...wasn't obvious to me. Am I just dumb?

I have a feeling it's just to prevent Kenshin from seeing Celestia.

Reborn as a Skypean is the first story, connected to Cursed Gamer, which is then connected to Eternal Samsara. Each of these stories is great as a stand-alone, but together they create this amazing hyperverse. As far as I know, his "One Thrust" novel is not connected to this hyperverse. Maybe it is but there isn't any reference that I have taken notice of yet.

Rival mean they are kinda equal. Someone as prideful as him won't admit to that.

Didn't Reach the top 3 huh? sad. need more chapters

Craving Mooore!!

replying to the wrong guy mate

I love a good TDG fanfic, but this is not it. From the wishes to the Main character, it just did not vibe with me. But I do think some others may like it so give it a read before judging.

MC seems stressed. Some relaxing slice-of-life chapters should be done. Maybe bond with his newly attained subordinates.

when did he become a chunin? as in which ep does that show? I don't remember him becoming a chunin. he participated in the exam and got promoted to Jonin level like Neji. It was war time so his promotion was accelerated.

The writing style was strangely familiar to me but after realizing you wrote the Sasuke fanfic, my expectations peaked. My only concern is that after I commit you may drop this like your other ones. I really hope you don't 🙏

Kakashi was never a Chunin. He jumped to Jonin straight from Genin.

From the looks of it, Astra has a favourite, that being, Shelur. I don't mind it but it does seem the time of them together is far more than the others. Like the focus is more on the Orc now. I get it that it's Astra's all-time fantasy.

I am from the Maldives 🇲🇻

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That's some mighty fine idea if I say so myself. Author: