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It usually scales with engagement from the Author.

Definitely needs some work on Grammar. Like, who uses 'u' in a novel?

Bro's been drinking his own medicine like crazy

You gotta come up with a way to encourage readers to drop them Powerstones and stuff. Get the ball rolling, y'know?

This story's good so far. Definitely readable, definitely enjoyable. Although I'm not the biggest fan how the timekip was done, I understand. The Info dumps and the way the training plans are written is kinda icky. Almost feels like AI. I think the 'professional' terms make it seem a bit too formal for a story meant for entertainment. But those things are fixable, and it's not too late to improve in later chapters, since these aren't deterring enough for readers to drop the story. I hope I don't seem too critical here, since I genuinely want this story to succeed. More high-quality entertainment is always welcomed.

Thragg's locked in fr.

Yeah, comment section's right for once...

That's a leap beyond logic...

This comment section is sad, man...

Well, at least he did something. A lot of people lack the empathy, not to mention the balls.