Vanlal_Venhima

the chapter was great and the plot is quite nice as well although the speech was too long

nice,this is how I would do it too..maybe more painful then this one who knows..this is just satisfaction

Everything especially the update stability is good except the world back ground which is too plain. More info needed to imagine more of the the scene and more character development as well there is a nice plot about after each 3 chapter which is quite good as well

Yes,I think the novel need about of a recheck the novel itself has potential but the way you convey it makes the difference so I want the author to be more careful

it has always been

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LOL🤭

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