I_Am_YourDad
Lv4
Hello There, Dear Son Your Father Is Here~~ (I finally got the milk)
2022-05-28 BeigetretenGlobal
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I_Am_YourDad6hAntwortet auf Phantom_Wolf_2807Because Doom has made it one of his duties to please all those booties.- I_Am_YourDad6hKommentiert
How it even gets power??
Sure it's one with enough power to singlehandedly destroy several small counties, or one large one, but the feeling remains the same. - I_Am_YourDad7hKommentiert
Why don't you just buy Baxter?
Mentally making sure everything was in order for my second meeting of the day. - I_Am_YourDad10hKommentiert
That is heIIa mature answer
"At the same time, I want to be stronger. So that I won't lose you because of my helplessness! like…" - I_Am_YourDad10hKommentiert
You really wanna know..
After about ten minutes, she came to the living room after completing her work. Seeing a serious child sitting on the sofa, she immediately sat beside him, picked him up from the sofa, and put him on her lap. Our male protagonist showed an expression of irritation at this gesture, after all, he is an "old" man with a psychological age of thirty. Being teased by a sixteen year-old girl by lifting and placing him on her lap like a kitten was too much. How would you feel if you were lifted up like that by, say, a giant woman? - I_Am_YourDad10hKommentiert
Will you kindly write it in English?
Katon Gokakyuu no jutsu - I_Am_YourDad11hKommentiert
Sigh It's so perfect but they had to ruin it for God knows what..
"Isn't it true? They botched Civil War, ruined Doctor Strange, threw in Captain Marvel for no reason just to mess things up even more. And don't get me started on that Thor fiasco!" - I_Am_YourDad16hKommentiert
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Next time if this brat dares to come again, you will see how I will break his dog legs, how can miss be something that can be sullied? - I_Am_YourDad16hKommentiert
There should be a "not" somewhere in there.
In that case, wouldn't he really have the talent to become an alchemist? - I_Am_YourDad16hAntwortet auf Own
Exactly 🤣🤣
Xiao Ming nodded in satisfaction and looked for a rope to hang it around his neck. - I_Am_YourDad16hKommentiert
Wut?
"Hehehe, I know, Young Master Xiao Yan has such a strong talent, I can't even wait to please him." - I_Am_YourDad18hKommentiert
That is a FÚÇKING HOKAGE, not your nanny!!
"And who to decide who will go to the finals and who won't?!" An angry exclamation sounded from one of the Suna squads. - I_Am_YourDad18hKommentiert
My opinion is - 80% MC's POV 20% Important Characters POV
I need a feedback on something. I currently focus on the MC's story and POV and don't write other scenes that is not involved MC directly, like HIruzen's meetings with Koichi, Danzo's cooking yet another scheme, other important characters in the background doing something, and other things like that. I do run in mind the things like that while writing my story though, even if I don't write it directly. But now I'm not sure if this is the good approach with the story, as some things might happen very abruptly with that while no one would see that coming. So guys, I'm asking for some feedback here, what you think I should do? Should I continue with current approach with mostly MC's point of view, or should I write more scenes without MC to make story more fluent and with less too-abrupt events?] - I_Am_YourDad18hKommentiert"What a disappointment…" Yuta said regretfully while staring blankly at the Tatsuko's dead body under his feat.
- I_Am_YourDad18hKommentiert
The Perseverance!
[AN: Yuta didn't calculate properly the time he spent in time-loop, so I'm as author took that responsibility for him, it was a little more than 12 years… I ques getting hurt by Tatsuko did make Yuta a lot more focused on training and pushed him to give his all this time. - I_Am_YourDad18hKommentiert
Finally. He realised
Yuta is no longer finding excuses for limiting his time-loop training or postponing it anymore, and finally takes it seriously. His fire style training being monotone and boring but seeing a gradual improvement with time, it motivates Yuta to continue his grind. - I_Am_YourDad18hAntwortet auf Vastoking
That may very well be the speciality of Enma's species.
[AN: Creating a lost arm with Henge is a great idea, isn't it? - I_Am_YourDad19hAntwortet auf SONGOKU3290
Actually this might really be true.
Yuta nods but Hikari looked not convinced, she said, "So that how it is, but you rarely speak to each other, are you sure you are friends? And Itachi taught the Shadow Clone jutsu to you Yuta, and also promised to help you with Genjutsu. Is all of that are just because you are friends, or maybe you offered something in return?" - I_Am_YourDad19hKommentiert
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Yuta nods but Hikari looked not convinced, she said, "So that how it is, but you rarely speak to each other, are you sure you are friends? And Itachi taught the Shadow Clone jutsu to you Yuta, and also promised to help you with Genjutsu. Is all of that are just because you are friends, or maybe you offered something in return?" - I_Am_YourDad19hKommentiert
They are no Chunins imo
'Isn't that was too easy?' Yuta thought unable to believe of how easy that was, to kill that Chunin level shinobi…