Kaelross

I guess since his shift is iver he is not sure whether or not he would be able operate properly if he tried, and if you considered the role he had was completed.

Well I agree It takes time to cook Something like this. You have to research a lot and make new thoeries, the world etc. Keep up the good work

The last review i posted for this was around 500 chapter into the story, well now that I have read around 1300 chapters, I would Like to say that review was an not exactly excellent it was around 4.6-4.8(Not enough for this novel though). The story Has its own charm to it despite sometime difficult to understand its words , only sometimes though. I said in the last review that it was difficult to understand, you use difficult words etc.. That I would like to it take back. This gives the story its own pulling force to the readers, it keeps them hooked and thinking what's going to happen next. The writing itself is impeccable as well as the story and everything it brings, every character has a certain depth to them, that's all I had to say. I was wondering if you have plans for another novel after shadow slave, asking as a reader who liked SS Thanks for this Story!

Julien gonna snap again and be back to save his girl!

I Have read till chapter 421, I think the novel is going to be one of the best on this Platform, It has a lot of potential as well, The characters are good and the story as well. This is just my opinion not criticizing the novel: 1. Something you can work is the way of your story telling , I am not saying that your story telling is bad but it could be improved a lot sometimes it seems like the graveness of the situations are not well described, sometimes too simple vocabulary. 2. I have read till now and seemed like the story is dependent upon the suffering of the character too much at the same time in terms of intensity and frequency of it, and sometimes the power ups makes sense and don't at the same time, like how Frey and the ML are at similar level in terms of strength, and is seems like the story is not going anywhere, like DBZ(no offense) and same for the powerups as well. My main point is that at this point the story right now seems only about suffering and no actual story progression at all, it got interesting when they went to the other planet but it all went downhill the latest arc, in the Ultras continent. This is just what i wanted to say about what I Saw and read in the novel. Will keep supporting this novel in future as well. Author please don't take this as a negative review, because it has a lot of potential and if the things I mentioned earlier are given some thought the story may reach in the top rankings!

I have read till 500 chapters! Overall the novel is one of the best I have read, the world building and the lore you explore while in dream realm is quite attention grabbing! I gave everything a 5/5 except writing quality, I am not saying that you your grammar aur vocabulary is bad or anything like that, but sometimes you use a lot of difficult to understand words, and sometimes too simple, it leaves you wondering what the hell does that mean or something like "is that it?" no other description, it becomes hard to understand what the world you are trying to build, overall I understand what the story is conveying and what you are trying to say superficially, not exactly understanding the what you described. The story itself is excellent and one of the best and from the fandom I can see I have yet to scratch the surface of the novel! Keep up the work! thanks for this wonderful novel! And I am sorry if somethings I said are hurtful to you as an author, but I thought I should say those things because this already incredible novel will be even better then before. If you understand from a readers point of view!

Just glad the same didn't happen as that church girl😭 it left me depressed fr

This is sick

no chapter for 4 days, what happened?

I WANT MORE OF THIS ABSOLUTE DRUGGGGG!!! #BLOODPUMPING