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    Antwortet auf Weebish_Jedi

    yes. create

    Ch 56 Chapter 56 : Sabito and Makomo's wish
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    Antwortet auf Rowan_Urdaneta

    yeah I added your point too bro

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 : Ignored Skill.
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    Antwortet auf An_op_Angel

    yes there are gods?

    Ch 3 Escaping the base
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    Antwortet auf Rowan_Urdaneta

    In truth, I didn't think much about it but after your opinion, it makes sense. It's like they are just feeding the demon for later plot

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 : Ignored Skill.
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    Antwortet auf Phil_Morris

    yeah right the building was good but the author just ruined it.

    Ch 4 Getting ready for the future
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    Antwortet auf HSG_1999

    well the 'mark' works exactly for that as i have already written

    During this time, they had all trained diligently, achieving strengths impossible for normal humans. While they continued their training in Breathing techniques, Noah introduced them to another skill: Haki. To his surprise, some of them began awakening abilities of their own, despite Noah's expectation that they would need a more stressful environment. After pondering this, Noah concluded it must be due to one of his unknown abilities.
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    Antwortet auf 0_Eclipse_0

    I also included more characters like Bloodscream

    Ch 4 Getting ready for the future
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    Antwortet auf Phil_Morris

    yeah that's the one I'm changing some things here and there. there will be plot change too

    Ch 4 Getting ready for the future
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    Antwortet auf SnitchKnishes10

    that's why we don't get any girls

    As for Noah, he has already felt the changes in his body, while sitting and doing push-ups. Before Noah was exercising in his spare time but at the end, he was only 15 years old so his physical fitness was considerably weak. He could only achieve about 100 consecutive push-ups before in his exercises.
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    Antwortet auf BobUchiha29

    No it's a translation, so i didn't change the rewards but I will in the future.

    A new interface popped up in front of him and Noah used all of his token '30'
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    Antwortet auf Juhiko

    the reason is in today's extra chapter. Hope that explains it. yeah it's too many even for me. At first I thought I should just make it seem like 5 kids were there or something like that but it doesn't feel right to do experiments with so many scientists on just a couple of kids. It's not like hydra has any morals to take less children. So I just took it.

    Ch -1 Intro
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    Antwortet auf Crom_Darkstar

    😅😅 I mean I wanted to show their growth from being scared kids to playful kids. Like at first they should be kind of in a state of losing all hope for life than to finding their reason kinda thing. But I couldn't pull it off. It's like it sounded cool in my mind but somehow I can't write it.

    Ch 12 Extra 01 : Choosing their name.
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    Antwortet auf Rowan_Urdaneta

    yes he will. That's the only short cut to breathing techniques without much stakes

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 : Ignored Skill.
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    Antwortet auf Crom_Darkstar

    He won't do it from now on. it's everyone's dream to try it at least once right

    "Thunder Breathing: First Form - Thunderclap and Flash," Noah announced, and the distinct sound of a sword being drawn echoed through the air.
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    Antwortet auf Crom_Darkstar

    I uploaded it

    Ch 9 Changing their worldview.
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    Antwortet auf Rowan_Urdaneta

    yes he will. its not like he needs a breathing technique but it's every weebs dream right.

    Ch 54 Chapter 54 : Conflict.
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    Antwortet auf Lachgar

    I added my own touch. > I added a proper backstory to MC > I changed the system and instead of getting it free, I will add why and how he got it. > I am introducing more characters like the recent, Bloodscream and roughhouse

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    Antwortet auf Bharath_M984

    no

    > Mutant power : memory manipulation - Can enhance or read one's memory
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    His mission deemed successful, Noah left the symbol of their group itched on the ground with his marking power— A grinning demon with a half moon at his soldier and the name of their organization <ECLIPSE> written below. Then he transformed into light, vanishing into the night sky. After gaining some distance, he pressed the remote control's detonation button.
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    Undeterred by his initial failure, Bloodscream morphed into a monstrous form, further enhancing his strength. With a primal growl, he launched another assault on Noah, striking with rapid succession. Noah, embodying light itself and wielding both devil fruit powers and masterful Observation Haki, swiftly danced through the battlefield, evading each of Bloodscream's attacks while countering with precise strikes of his own using a light sword.
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