Charmys_Chef

It'd be cool if the MC started his own hero agency with him & Midoriya along with other people and possibly OC's. There's a lot of possibilities there.

Hmmm, not really any dialogue out of the 16 paragraphs. Dialogues & conversations between characters are vital, it keeps the story flowing smoothly. Just a suggestion though.

Awesome, glad it's back, I'm looking forward to seeing how this all pans out.

This is a fun read, thank you author.

Hmmm, 4 chapters into this about the meeting with the Spider, and none of it has been about the meeting itself. I understand that there has to be build up, but I think dialogue with the Spider would have been more interesting.

I wonder if he could get the same information from the Senju compound as well as blood samples from Naruto.

Incredible chapter with incredible friendship/brotherhood. It'll be great to see their dynamic grow throughout the Clone Wars and how their trust will also be tested.