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I wouldn't say the premise is horrible, but as obi wan would say, the Chinese is strong in this one. too strong
it's Chinese after all, at this point that's not even a bad switch lol
Eh, in the end, it's your story. In my experience, it's better to let the author cook in most cases. If someone doesn't like it, they can duck off lol, they don't have to read it. write whatever you think would fit your character best. I'm looking forward to future chapters. Keep up the good work!
the chat gpt is strong with this one.
that was such a fire novel, did it ever get more chapters? plz lemme know
overseer of one piece I think
I need a Sirzechs diss track at some point
oh this one for sure, no contest
what? That ain't even close to right lol