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Even if there isn't NTR in this story, at least I think so, since I only read up to Chapter 30, in my mind I already considered that there would be one in this story since the signs pointed to that, so I dropped it right away, but then I realized I was thinking about giving it a chance but after I discovered that your other story had ntr in the first chapter I abandoned it
author wanted to ask a question about this multiverse story or not (I hope it is) cough
author I understand but I want you to keep some things and add others equal power levels that have a harem and also that they have at least three wishes and also that the protagonist has the ability to travel through the multiverse like the protagonist of that DC: New Krypton ( Omniverse)
Well man, in a way I agree with you that I really like the story but if he's going to do this the author better not do it without anyone dying because I really like the characters I hope that if he gets a reality check in the future I hope it's someone talking to him or him learning something from someone. It was from receiving a reward that changes his personality a little
Hey man why don't you give him the Fountain of Youth in nanatsu no taizai so he stays young forever and he can train as much as he wants at his house he can put a day on earth a year ago at his house so he can train with one style for 10 years or with another style in 10 years and one will only spend about 10 days on planet Earth And you can also add that he can deactivate his immortality so he only activates it when he finishes a fight with another person and he recover instantly
If he goes to other worlds besides the multiverse, sending him to Rick Mori's universe would be very interesting. Oh and this story will have volumes like your other story that you added another volume to but those who don't know think it's another story