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Yeah editing and rewriting if I dont have a clue how I can write it better.

Yeah I often let it correct mistakes I make. Its faster that way

Thats good to hear, thanks for your feedback! ^.^ ~Cheers

Yes he got memories. But they are only for songs or maybe other stuff i dont know yet. I dont want him to cheat through his life. Maybe I can edit a little so that its better to understand. Btw thanks for pointing it out

Sorry about that, I forgot that. I also wrote a couple of times that they scrolled through their phone because its the basics know instead of newspaper etc. I will edit that point

Okay thx for the ideas. Let me cook and try to rewrite the stuff

And of course thank you for your opinion <3

I know what you mean BUT it cant be a 1:1 Story. Nero changed the Life of Charlie and others. There is a Hook Up in Chap 14 and there will be more later. Rose will be introduced to Alan and Jake in Chapter 18 witch will show how "annoyed" Charlie is from her. I will rewrite the first chapters after the story is etablished and I will try to better include those traits. Lets think about the Story as a "What if" Story.