DraconTorrin

Ohhhh yeah standard cultivation bullshit, "saved his life, family and wealth" and I maybe will repay that. You told that I am wrong? You disrespect my face, you do not see mount Tai beg me for mercy, I do not care that you saved me 5 min ago xD

Well only reason would be that Tinkatink played with Orbs -- one of them is from Lord of Time soo maybe that is the reason for skipping midstage? I try to reason og author fumble.

They did not have slavery in "normal" sense - they just enslaved their own servs. Russian system was probably the harshest on peasants in entire "civilised" world so they did not need slaves

If we go through with Jap sensibilities then it is not a problem, it is allowed in Japan to marry your First-cousin but no longer so widespread.

Well the translation need work, inconsistencies in names create minor confusion, rest is good I like it so far, considering that I moved recently more to fanfics that goes "lets do our own staff and my influence will change a plot" and not straught up "I will change plot directly by my own"

Hope that he will not go trying to hump every pokemon from now on

Did that motherfucker send them crude version of dynamite almost 100 years before orgnial. Well, how to create the nitroglicerin but still it is almost the same

World Backgound is almost irrelevant here but that is good. We do not need to care about "big" problems, Ash will deal with this. We have our cozy farming simulator ;-) Nice, hearthwarming story, quality of translation is good do not see major issues. As not native speaker as long as I understand and do not need to scratch my head wtf is the quality of the translation I am happy. Story is a slice of life so if you want any major action you will not find it here. Characters are good, nothing groundbreaking but solid. I would like him find teleporter mon and with the help of it to attempt gym challange in Paldea. Just tp into the city, fight gym leader and return after the fight back at ranch xD

Operating word "probably" would exchange Exeggutor for Vileplum or Victribel, and would probably exchange Rhydon for Areodactyl. If we are keeping ourselfs to stricly "regional teams" considering that Kanto and Jotho is one League then woul throw out Rhydon and use Tyra in his place and for Grass Type I would use Bellosom instead of Exe. Would also throw out the Pigot and maybe got Togepi to evolve into Togekiss. Mostly quality of the translation was too much pain for me, but I tried to preserve and then I see that he starts collecting orginal Blue team and I decided that the quality is too much if I am going to see the same 6 pokemon. If the quality would have been better then, the OG six would have not been a problem as much

Or hear me out, kill them and make glorious bacon :D