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2022-05-01 BeigetretenGlobal

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Viola_Bear1yr
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Ch 1 Proud Chef
Reincarnation Of Mrs. Chef : Like A Fool
Urban · Vanila_Michelle
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Viola_Bear1yr
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she is very lucky
"Look Miss, if you don't mind I will marry Miss and be the father of the baby you are carrying," said the doctor.
..not continue..
Urban · Vanila_Michelle
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Viola_Bear1yr
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poor Ivy
"Miss Ivy's pregnancy is very vulnerable, she could miscarry if her condition still doesn't improve for the next few days," explained the doctor.
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Urban · Vanila_Michelle
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Viola_Bear1yr
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up to you. i don't care
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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i found too much words oh from chapter 3 to chapter 5
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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too long ummm
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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You should write father using Father not father.
"Really Fa–"
Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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no comma after what for?
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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using dot after before " the punctuation is make confused
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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too much words oh in this chapter
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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it is not need using #### or something like that
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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like it, but you have to improve your writing skill first.
Ch 1 Chapter-1
Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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try to improve your grammar and chinese language
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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I don't understand with your story. Make me really confused
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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what the ...
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Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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where is the dialogue tag?
"My Lady."
Who is the Villain? [Will be republished]
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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The cover is nice but there are a mistakes at your blurb. Like yieliang or moon, you should write yueliang not yieliang. I suggest you to learn chinese language first before you write your book. but, i like the book eventhough i am not a fan of BL
You, Me & Us (BL)
Fantasie · Eternal_bunny
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Viola_Bear1yr
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Areumdaum Yeoja
Lucia bermata bulat berwarna coklat gelap, hidung mancung, warna kulit kuning langsat, dan bibir tipisnya berwarna merah muda seperti bunga mawar. Sedangkan Diana bermata sipit berwarna hitam, hidung mancung, warna kulit agak gelap, namun memiliki bentuk bibir yang hampir sama dengan Lucia.
CEO's Revenge
Urban · Vienna_Gu
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Viola_Bear1yr
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duh maunya apa sih Dee?
Sebenarnya hari itu Arya hendak mengumumkan pernikahannya dengan Diana Kartika, tapi tiba-tiba dia mengacaukan acaranya.
CEO's Revenge
Urban · Vienna_Gu
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Viola_Bear1yr
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Wah cerita baru ya kak? Keren nih, kisah mahasiswa yang berlibur di rumah hantu. Jadi penasaran kelanjutannya gimana, bahasanya ringan dan enak dibaca
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Urban · Vanila_Michelle
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