InLoveWithTheCold

Is it weird that I'm rooting for Overhaul?

Também estou usando, mas você pode entender. O problema é que não é revisado.

I didn't like that... It seemed something like: look how the world bows to me, yes me, who is better, stronger... (Yes Homelander) You know? It seems boring.............. Mainly because there is no real conflict, one side is already being taken as the "absolutely right and indisputable". It seems like a lot, I don't know, child?

It could be done as a list, type like this , he knows ?

I wanted to know the wiki page, that... I already looked for the other rewards on the wiki and I didn't either, sad

It's fun, and that's it. Did you expect anything more in a FF like this? And now, seriously; This is good, very interesting, NOT SUPERFICIAL. And it enriches the story. I think that's it.

I believe the previous chapter is good, although I personally found the pace too fast, I believe it lacked subtlety, such as the heroes' immediate reaction (Helmet running right after waking up and completely understanding the situation, Medusa Three's immediate panic, and the lack of a timer, which I think is one of the best parts of the traps, "you have five minutes to []", is a classic phrase of his, as well as setting the time in which it happens, but it's great. And I don't know if Mr. Author has already thought about this, but I'm going to talk about it anyway; how about simultaneous traps? You know, I don't remember which movie this happened, but I remember that the police found several traps at once, and I found them great (although this happened because they hadn't discovered it before, meaning they had several with "prey").

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It's me!

Brilliant, I wanted to say something else, or more, but I don't know what to say, so I think I'll leave it at that. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaáaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaãaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa