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N_RR19hAntwortet auf Rock_FellerCh 89 …goodbye- N_RR20hAntwortet auf Sodeno_MZE"Hayama... Listen carefully, I like Yukinoshita." I said, leaving no room for misunderstanding.
- N_RR1dKommentiert
nah, was that necessary? it seemed to going well with out it
[Answer: System has been upgraded to include an Artificial Intelligence to help user make the most of its functions and abilities.] - N_RR3dKommentiertCh 17 Bluffing Is A Way Of Life...
- N_RR3dKommentiert
is this novel going to Japanese honorifics? just asking.
"Thank you, Ruby-chan," Ashton said quietly, his usual playfulness replaced by a touch of awkwardness. - N_RR3dKommentiert
This status is good
╚════════════════════════╝ - N_RR3dAntwortet auf YourAverage_Reader
I am not talking about the stats. it just useless long spaces
Thanks for reading, everyone! I hope you enjoyed the chapter. I've made some changes to the system interface. If you're satisfied or dissatisfied with them, please leave a comment. - N_RR5dKommentiert
just don't make it a tragic novel
[Be patient the villainous main lead promised will be delivered.] - N_RR5dKommentiert
it is far better... but why are the spaces between lines still long?
Thanks for reading, everyone! I hope you enjoyed the chapter. I've made some changes to the system interface. If you're satisfied or dissatisfied with them, please leave a comment. - N_RR5dKommentiert
this sentence came double
her fierce eyes were filled with disgust and boiling rage as she stood up and grabbed Asuka's collar, "Say what do you mean by touching a little bit, you with your damn slum dogs tried to publicly tear my clothes, you humiliated me, you disgusting bastard." Jane screamed out, as tears formed in her eyes due to intense rage. - N_RR7dKommentiertCh 2 Chapter 2: Three Wishes
- N_RR7dAntwortet auf YourAverage_Reader
the whole thing. come up with something simple and basic. it is tough to get all details if the window is too long
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - N_RR7dKommentiertCh 15 Bitch You Wait, Till I Show You Your Damn Place!!!
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yep you really should work on this status window
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - N_RR7dKommentiertWhat Now I Have To Confess???
- N_RR7dKommentiert
hmm, do something with this status projection. it suks actually. why don't you check out few other well acclaimed novel for example.
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - N_RR7dKommentiertHayato paused at the training ground's edge, his stern eyes locking with Asuka's. "Just attend the awakening ceremony, Don't bother with the entrance exam, your current skills won't qualify you." He took a small pause before continuing, "I'll handle securing your admission directly."
- N_RR7dKommentiert
MCs father is still alive but he just turned villan or betrayed right?
After he left, finally, the man who had been sitting silently in the corner all the time mumbled in a low voice, "I wonder why Ragnar allowed his dear son to be with the Kaito." He grinned, "What are you planning, Ragnar?" - N_RR7dKommentiert
surprisingly their opinion on MC is a lot better then expected. at least they are willing to see it for themselves
with a small pause, he again continued, "It's his path, so he will decide if he wants to work with Black Dragon or not, if he wants to be a Warden or not. It's his choice. I want you to keep that in mind." Keeping his cup down, with a blank face Sword Saint moved out, "Now that the meeting is over, I will take my leave."