Kollum

Jesus, Anthony.

just Econimant

by gawd, incomplete sentences are just everywhere my guy...

made*

you split a lot of sentences into stuff that doesn't flow on its own as sentences

the first part of this sentence doesn't really flow. something like "A small look of shock flashed on his face, which..." would sound much smoother

this doesn't stand as a sentence on its own. if you used a comma on the previous line and had this, it would make sense, or you could simply swap "bringing" to "bring"

definitely not defeat, but probably be a good enough fight that it wouldn't be worth it for Luci to step in.

Did supes notice the new eyes? or just not comment on it?