Ziad_2348

Always wanted a proper Orochimaru SI. Good that it doesn't have a straight up stereoypical system that would make him godlike in like 30 chapters.

I mean you could just not make gay stuff

he most likely will just like aizen did

HELL NAW Reveal it to literally NOBODY

Personally, I am almost never a fan of making the mc join a peerage. He doesn't need to, and the idea of basically enslavement just puts me off. Would rather have him form a business-like contract with rias/sona and get stronger himself.

Keep it up

Continue it. My main issue rn with it is we are spending like a lot of idle time with the league of shadows. Like, we should start wrapping this lil arc up and move on. You don't have to remove the league from the story or anything, just give the mc the opportunity to get away so that he can interact with other characters as well.

Please tell me Gwen and Peter make up soon. I kinda found the whole burning bridges thing unnecessary. Like you could have just had him say "ya know my uncle got shot and killed, so I am going through hard times, and I just need some time to myself" But anyway, now that you mentioned Peter wanting to make it up for Gwen, and the message thing, I have high hopes for them making up.

maybe like a one piece character with good haki next?