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The writing wasn't clear at first but started getting pretty good after around 10 chapters. The interaction between the characters is lively engaging, with a variety of unique character designs. However, even though the novel is a female lead, I strongly believe that Romeo is the one leading the story. It's a bit confusing, but not a bad move. Not bad, can't wait to see how far you ca go...
The idea of the flashback is really interesting. This kind of move is pretty rare so its presence in a novel will catch the reader's interest. I like the fact that the story is following the development of the Protagonist step by step without avoiding other side characters as well. But the story is flowing pretty slow and more action and violence needs to be added since it's a war and military genre.