Jacob_Hobbs_7913

The story telling is set up great, the only issue being that the way it’s written is a little weird, the paragraph composition is kinda strange.

That’s kinda how the goblin slayer is before character development

I don’t think you’ve ever read or watched something worth seeing

I don’t feel like this is being shoved down my throat, but I do feel that this kinda came out of nowhere with little context

It’s fiction

It’s fiction

That is the pinnacle of instigating

Just think about the potential for character development

(I don’t actually want to kill author, keep up the good work👍)