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Frost_write

Frost_write

Lv2

im a writer and a little inexperienced

2022-03-25 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Frost_write
    Frost_writea year ago
    Kommentiert

    Thie chapter is a bomb, whoever the author is, is sure very creative and good with dialogues. Mostly the ML character as it is hidious, I'll prefare of you make him more wicked you know. Nice job great one.

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  • Frost_write
    Frost_write2 years ago
    Verschickt

    The book is nice so far. please I'm looking for a comic artist I want to submit a project before Saturday. Thank you the book is so amazing thanks for the comic.

  • Frost_write
    Frost_write2 years ago
    Verschickt

    I'm a sorry author but this is the best I can give you. I'm not trying to hurt your feelings but. The writing quality is full of grammatical errors that make a reader confuse. I just started the first chapter and I wasn't halfway through when I lost interest and dropped it. Although the rest won't tell you this I hope you improve and write calmly.

  • Frost_write
    Frost_write2 years ago
    Verschickt

    The novel is nice and eye catching. you will get lost in the plot , character and everything when you read it . Keep the goof work author .

  • Frost_write
    Frost_write2 years ago
    Antwortet auf Daoist_Culture

    hah. sorry captain your local crew have learnt their lesson

  • Frost_write
    Frost_write2 years ago
    Antwortet auf Daoist_Culture

    I'm sorry Daoist please don't be annoyed and please be patient with the author. Thank you once again for the review, now I know what the readers disliked

  • Frost_write
    Frost_write2 years ago
    Kommentiert

    he is

  • Frost_write
    Frost_write2 years ago
    Antwortet auf Daoist_Culture

    Sigh, dear Daoist can you give this author a chance to go far with this novel? So that you can understand it? one Mark is not gay. That's why I didn't tag the LGBT. you will find out when I update it. please don't drop. the novel and note that I'm trying to write what might happen in real life so bear with me

  • Frost_write
    Frost_write2 years ago
    Antwortet auf

    No problem I hope you read more and tell me what you think about the novel

  • Frost_write
    Frost_write2 years ago
    Antwortet auf Daoist3vXS3L

    How, please . I don't understand?

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The lust system

Have you ever wondered what will happen to you when you watch high pg 18 movies or think about sexual activities even when on the main road? Have you ever wondered what the result will be? Do you expect it to bring fortune to you or misfortune? _____________________________________ ________________ Mark Williams an 18-year-old high school student at Blossom high was having a good day watching some high-rated movie after receiving a good beating from one of the bullies in his school just because he admired a lady, they had a crush on. He was fully engrossed in the movie that soon he felt his head was about to explode and he almost blacked out when he heard a piercing sound from his head. [Ding!..welcome host to the lust system, I'm Alia by name, and ill lead you to the world of women's domination ] A system! he thought, but how will the system help him with the complicated issue he has now. Stay tuned guys I assure you this isn't a novel although it might look like that in the beginning. So please don't drop this novel.

Frost_write · Urban
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13 Chs

The Exodus (An End Game _Find our way out )

"In blood sweat or tears, agony, sorrow, tragedy, and sadness that made us part away again. I shall find you Alicia and make you mine. Mine and mine alone you shall carry our child and bring forth the last desire we never had the chance to experience..Happiness. The world is so cruel to us that they hate our existence, they forgot all the things we had done for them. All our sacrifices have long been thrown to the dust. They made you hate me and now here you are fighting for your life..." Nicklaus hugged the half body of a human and cried bitterly. He tried to seal the blood flowing from her body but instead, his hand turned into flames He removed his hands and covered her corpse with his body. *Rumble The thunder clapped and the rain fell heavily mourning for the two lovers. Alicia smiled weakly and stretched her pale fingers to wipe the tears from his face. "I never hated you, Nicklaus you were the one that rejected me. You hated my existence because of my kind. I love you Nicklaus and I will always *Cough..do " Her eyes slowly closed, the rain pouring on her face and wet her long golden hair. "I'm -Im sorry..Alicia? Alicia!! No no, don't leave me alone here..Alicia!!" He roared from pain and loneliness as his other part died and left him in the world. *Rumble The earth shook and mountains collapsed, the world was in chaos. Nicklaus stood up with the cores on his arms. His Silver hair covered his face. A pair of wings grew out from his back and her sour to the sky. "I must take my revenge !!" He roared. *Boom

Frost_write · Fantasie
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1 Chs

My Misogamist CEO

Entangled in the love between two brothers , Ryu and Ryn , Annalisa found herself struggling to survive the hardship of the world the pain and discrimination that made her lost a lot of opportunities. She found herself sad , when she learnt the truth that her father was a drug dealer and her mum died from the cause, and she was sold out to replace the money and the woman she thought was her mother wasn't but instead the maid from the person whom she was sold to. She was naive and dumb girl , who played with everyone, she always put smiles on her beautiful face , but who knows that every smile have a deep meaning in it. she fell over hills for her boss Ryn whom in turned dislike women , not because he was a gay but because he was a misogamist. She tired with all her effort to stop loving him but it all turn out in vain , she watched as he humiliated her, and discriminated her. His twin brother Ryu was the confirm opposite. He was a play boy and loved women a lot , but when he saw Annalisa due to their unprepared encounter he fell over hills for her. Now Annalisa is entangled in a love triangle, and still trying her best to slove her family problem . Do you think she can make it ?.. Who do you think she will accept or who will accept her among the brothers . Why do you think black people are discriminated a lot ?.

Frost_write · Urban
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7 Chs