Nyxxie_Auclair

I just finished reading the first season, it's a very good novel. I did not find any grammar flaws. Almost all areas of this work are excellent. Will definitely recommend this book. It has a unique plot, which as a writer I love. The author did a very good job. The only thing I found a little uncomfortable during reading was that, the author does a lot of telling instead of showing. Other than that this novel is really good.

It was well written. There were a few sentences that stood out to me as awkward but other than that this is a well-written chapter. Keep up the good work, author.

EGGSCUSE ME

Its a really well written book and has a lot of potential! The emotions, characters are all well written! Except the few typos and grammar errors, this book was a wonderful read for me

typo

isnt the fact already known?

Wow this book totally caught me off guard. I really like the writing and the way the author describes the things. The plotline is interesting too. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters!

This novel is really well written! Good job author~ I added it to my collection! It has an interesting premise and is an easy read. I wish I could read all the chapters, but sadly I have to wait. I will be cheering you on!

he...called her hun

use single quotes since double is for dialogue