NinjaGoldenLala

Finally finished reading this. First of all, Ossan's writing style in this novel is superb. I give 5 stars for this! The story and plot are magnificent. It's truly top-notch and I can tell that it's planned meticulously. However, what made me slightly disappointed is a little u know what scene. It seems that ossan planned only have 1 and be done with it. Still, I will stay for the story. Really recommended!

First of all, the start is quite slow. It's interesting, but it will take a bit of a point for my rating in this review. But after some chapters, the pace did pick up as he promised in his review. Second, the writing quality is superb. There is nothing to add here. Third, the update is stable. The author seems to have a record of it, seeing his previous two novels. Then, the Author delivers the promise of no harem. There is no sign of it yet, and the interaction between characters feels alive. Overall, All recommended, do read it!

Coming from Ossan, staying for the story. Tbh, I am one of Beta Readers after our conversation in the past, so I have read this until chapter 13-ish. I will try to review without giving spoilers. The power structure is great; it has Aspect that is connected to their Ability, which means each person has a different ability. Then there is, of course, that scene. It is written well, though not as much as in his other novels. The world-building is also in place, the background is a futuristic city, as written in the title. One most important point here is Magical Girls! I love it. Writing style didn't need to be said anymore. Almost no grammar mistake, and even if there is any, the author will fix it asap. Then rat. I love the rat. Long live rat!!

That's nice. Love the story, keep up hard work

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Thanks for the chapter! Finally the character I designed is used as a cover, thanks!

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See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

Coming from Ossan, staying for the story. This novel is the best among what he wrote, in my opinion. The MC is strong from the start. He's cunning, smart, and didn't hesitate to get what he want (even at the cost of annoying the original protagonist of the eroge) The world background is great too! Using Sins and Virtue as a way to judge good and evil. The domination system also interesting. It's not really explained yet, so we need to wait! I hope it's explained in the future. Also... because it's ossan. The character and the way he write ero character is just chef kiss! The update is 1 chapter a day it seems. But when I read the synopsis and his reply at latest chapter. he said he will increase it to 2 chapters after it is contracted. What a same, so 4 star for update for now. Good work!

Good good good. No Grammar mistake. Good world building. Solid character. Update update update update more more more more more. Update update update update more more more more more