Dylan_Cook_2376

that's reversed

can you imagine if they lived near the pacifist ocean?

did he just make eminence in shadow? 😂

i gave the story about 35 chapters to see if there was an overarching BBEG at least but there was none. The initial foray into the other world happened quickly and it almost lulls you into thinking things will happen.I will commend the author on excellent grammar, it is honestly the best part of this novel.

the story starts off great with the typical banished prince troupe. not necessarily played out but not revolutionary either. The MC routinely does things that needlessly make situations more complicated but plot armor is his number 1 tool.all of that could be forgiven if not for the constant grammatical errors. Read this during the 24 hr free period because otherwise I can't see spending coins on chapters.small addition: i didn't expect to get so annoyed by the use of Huck 😂

why does he refuse to upgrade the system!? 😂