ImmoralDegenerate

idk man, maybe your writing style is like this or you use it for correction at the end, but i advice maybe use something like quillbot to fix the unnatural parts

please don't use chatgpt, it sounds very unnatural, if you however do use it then please use an editor afterwards

chatgpt that you?

even that would have op abilities after awakening, its one piece what do you expect

unnatural dialogue Should have used a name/nickname instead of little brother overuse of brat, gets annoying good start but can be better, feels forced and out of tune due to writing

what he said? i don't remember

he's just like me fr