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Jackleell

Jackleell

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2022-03-13 BeigetretenAustralia
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  • Jackleell
    Jackleell2 days ago
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    First of all, I don’t understand how this has a 4.8 rating. The writing is some of the worst I’ve seen in a long time. The punctuation is atrocious, making it incredibly confusing to distinguish between speech and narrative text. That said, this review is meant to balance things out and provide honest feedback.

  • Jackleell
    Jackleell6 days ago
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    I somewhat enjoyed the novel, but there are issues that made it hard to continue. An 8-year-old acting like an adult is unrealistic, especially in a world with magic and gods—why didn’t anyone wonder if Harry was possessed? The way he talks to his grandparents was frustrating and off-putting. While I understand the portrayal of the British wizarding community, his behavior was just annoying to read. Additionally, while the grammar and spelling aren’t as bad as MTL, they’re still distracting at times."

  • Jackleell
    Jackleell7 days ago
    Antwortet auf Sir_Aguiar

    LOL, I actually read it, but for some reason, it’s not showing up. Webnovel seems to be bugged. That said, I’m clearly not the only one with issues—the ratings reflect that others have similar concerns.

  • Jackleell
    Jackleell10 days ago
    Antwortet auf ChaoticVoid_24

    Thanks for the reply. I was just pointing out that if the protagonist is Batman—or Bruce Wayne—and has access to unlimited money, he could have started a few projects to help the world. For example, with his supposed high IQ (which should be around 250), he could have created something to tackle pollution or develop solutions to slowly fix global problems. What’s the point of having infinite money if it’s not being used to its full potential? That said, I got sidetracked with a bit of a rant here. I understand what you mean about betrayal—it should shape someone to become stronger, not weaker, like the protagonist seems to be right now. However, I also recognize that there are different kinds of people, so I won’t impose my perspective on him just yet. I’ll keep reading to see if he evolves as a character. I’m currently on the chapter called Joker.

  • Jackleell
    Jackleell10 days ago
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    This story is mediocre, neither particularly good nor bad. If I had to pinpoint an issue, it would be the protagonist's personality—it’s honestly terrible. It’s no wonder he got betrayed, or if he didn’t, his insecurities about himself certainly make it seem inevitable. The AI's name being "World" is just ridiculous. If you can’t come up with a good name, just use Google or something generic like that. And asking it to call him "S"? That’s just absurd and makes the protagonist look foolish. Speaking of the protagonist, his personality is completely trash. Why is he in the DC Universe when he should be in the Overlord world? Furthermore, he could use his unlimited money to create something beneficial for the people in world he’s in before leaving, but I get the impression he’s the greedy type who wouldn’t give a single cent because of his insecurities. It’s frustrating to have such an annoying main character.

  • Jackleell
    Jackleell11 days ago
    Antwortet auf Xcalibur_Xc

    Lol, you're a joke. I enjoyed your Spider-Man 0X, but it had a less obvious AI writing style than this, so I know what I'm talking about. Also, what do you mean by "fake review spammer"? You're just in denial of the obvious fact here.

  • Jackleell
    Jackleell13 days ago
    Antwortet auf Xcalibur_Xc

    I just mentioned that this feels like AI writing style, and you're the one who keeps calling me stupid for no reason. After I pointed out a reasonable fact, I’ve noticed that your novel's writing style doesn’t feel any different from other AI-generated stories I’ve read before. I never said the story is bad; it’s just that it feels too much like AI writing, with unnecessary words in every paragraph because AI tends to do that. You need to stop calling people stupid when they point out something and try to engage in a reasonable discussion. Calling people names makes you come across as immature.

  • Jackleell
    Jackleell13 days ago
    Antwortet auf Xcalibur_Xc

    Lol, I can tell that you did because of how defensive you are. If it wasn’t true, you would have just ignored me and said nothing or tried to prove me wrong. But every reply has that defensive tone at the end *stupid*, which shows the kind of person you are—a liar and a child who fights anyone over the tiniest amount of offense. It’s 100% AI writing style without any human touch. I wouldn’t say the novel is bad per se, but it lacks a human touch and has unnecessary words in every paragraph of every chapter, making it feel like filler.

  • Jackleell
    Jackleell15 days ago
    Antwortet auf Xcalibur_Xc

    Lol, this is 100% AI. I know for a fact because I tried using it to write a story, and I didn’t like it because it changed my writing style. I’ve read AI-generated novels, so I can 100% tell what’s AI and what’s not.

  • Jackleell
    Jackleell20 days ago
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    This novel was great for the first 100 chapters, but after that, it went downhill really fast. It became slow-paced, boring, and just slice-of-life. As for the system, the protagonist only signed in twice, and aside from getting the three different types of Haki off-screen, there’s nothing else. Overall, the novel has become unbearable to read after 100 chapters and is just plain boring.

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