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This fanfic is enjoyable, but what I hate about this novel is the hypnosis on everyone he meets. I will keep reading, but I hope he stops using it. It's so stupid.

Ok, this is disappointing to read. If you were going to completely change Harry's roots and his family history, you should have just created a different character who was fresh. The Potter family can be traced back to Linfred of Stinchcombe, a 12th-century wizard who was a celebrated potion-maker and the original source of the family’s wealth. He was affectionately known as "the Potterer," which eventually became "Potter." I'm up to chapter 22, and it feels disappointing. I hate that Harry Potter fanfics always try to force their MC to go to school for absolutely no reason.

It's funny how you steal someone else's work and try to pass it off as your own story. Please report this guy. The original name of this novel is "Harry Potter: Lost Son" on fanfiction.net.

The more I read, the more I get disappointed. Where did this immortal grandma come from? _______________________________________________________________

Imagine stealing someone's work and then asking for money on Patreon. This is free to read on fanfic.net. This guy is a joke. ----------------------------

Okay, is it just me, or is the author deleting bad reviews? There is no way this should be rated 4.9. The grammar is bad, and some chapters have so much info dump that it feels like just word filler.

love it ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I see your point. If it's like that, I would say he picked the right bloodline, so I'm in the wrong for this one. Thanks for the explanation.

This is a fun story, but please get an editor to fix the chapters and grammar. __________________________________________________________________________

Okay, I could not keep reading this. The MC relies on the system too much and is disgustingly perverted. His behavior is off-putting and detracts from the story. The excessive dependence on the system makes the plot predictable and uninteresting. Overall, it lacks depth and character development, making it hard to stay engaged.

You nerfed him for the plot. If he had the choice to get whatever he wanted for a bloodline, he would have gotten the full Mark Grayson. i know he would have been overpower but he had the choice. GREED is human nature.

This is stupid. The hero Spider-Man, who made a fool of all the Avengers, can get beaten by a man with the power to turn off a quirk? Let's not forget, Spider-Man does not have a quirk; it was the spider bite that gave him his powers, not a quirk. This is a washed-down Spider-Man; all his powers got weakened.

stolen work from Harry crow by Robst on Fanfiction _________________________________________________________________-----------------------------

It's readable, but it's not the best. The systems are good, and he plans everything he will do. It's good, but I would have given it 3 stars if the translation was better. I never give 5 or 4 stars to a translated novel; I would have given those ratings to the original writer.

Why are you updating this? It's a stupid,Chinese, generic, poorly translated piece of trash. You should give up on the novel. __________________________________________________________________

This is a stupid reason to nerf him. If he had the choice to become powerful. And have you forgotten the gods in that world?

i did

This novel is good, but it's annoying to read because it's a really slow-paced story. For example, it took 30 chapters for the Triwizard Tournament to be over.

one of the best GOT fanfic ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________