JR_989
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2022-03-11 BeigetretenGlobal
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JR_989a year agoKommentiertit complimented
- JR_989a year agoKommentiert
her eyes
- JR_9892 years agoKommentiert
He may be good with the spear, but may be lacking with the sword [img=thinking]
- JR_9892 years agoKommentiert
The thought of "wanting to be friends" seems pretty unrealistic, going against her character setting...
- JR_9892 years agoVerschickt
Love this book tremendously so far. The main character is charming and plays cunningly with his smooth facade. The developing romance is endearing and the introduction in this magical world is well-developed. Definitely one of the gems in Webnovel!
- JR_9892 years agoVerschickt
The story definitely has potential, but a proofreader is truly recommended. Right now it is a hassle to try reading this piece.
- JR_9892 years agoKommentiert
"Why are you wandering..." not the other way around
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - JR_9892 years agoKommentiert
"does" singular-> plural "do/ don't"
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add "s" to the singular use of verbs like "who respects"
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