It turned out better than I expected. Keep up the good work. 👍

It was a reference to why he would never surpass Nephis. (ch. 767) His focus should be on his freedom but it isn't. He was Changing Star's puppet in the second nightmare before he even became an official slave. He's a mediocre MC.

If he lacks conviction after 800 chapters he's a willing slave. The only liar here is you.

It's already been established that Nephis is his master. She's knows his name and he's literally her slave. You tell people to read the book, yet deny this basic fact. Their interests align because that's what the author wanted. It's very forced. Your walls of text are redundant and don't disprove our position.

It's been a long time since I read it. I'm not reading it again. When he fought the Carapace Centurion against his better judgement. Whatever Nephis wants becomes the best option. Typically he acts as a willing slave, and "his" goals conveniently align with hers. Like Rizky said, "If the character is forced to act a certain way, then the plot can move forward regardless of the actual personality of the character." I see no deep friendship that spurred any character development. They were together a while, but that doesn't mean anything. All he taught her was how to lie. Just read the novel title you genius. He was destined to become a slave to something. Now we know for certain what it is. Brabbit and Rizky were 100% correct.

That's true. He got lots of hugs from Kai the beautiful man though. 😂

Future readers will focus on what they want to know, like what the title means. Sunny obviously becomes a slave, so stop lying.

Thanks for the update.

None of my points are unfounded. Readers have the right to know that the first nightmare is misleading, and that 800 chapters in, Sunless is still whining about being weaker than Nephis because he lacks 'conviction.' I don't care why you think Nephis should be stronger. Authors can rationalize anything they want. Your explanations don't invalidate our criticism.

MC goes from one extreme to another. First he's low key, now he's dissing the top cadets..

Sunny shouldn't need extra motivation; He's a slave. Taking 800+ chapters to surpass his boring classmate is not 'sudden.' I'll pass.

This is very similar to Archean Eon Art, which was was a great novel until the constant power-ups. Hopefully your novel will turn out different. Good luck.

That's ridiculous. Following your logic, nobody should critique a novel until it's finished. I've read hundreds of chapters. I also skipped ahead and found sentences like,"I wanted to be stronger than her. I really, really tried... all of it was for nothing ..." (ch. 767) That' weak.

The appeal of a post-apocalyptic novel is the chaos and unpredictability. It's boring when you always know what happens next. There's no sense of adventure. Good start, but these constant system spoilers ruin it for me.

Sunny can sIit a dying man's throat without remorse, yet gets all weak in the knees when women enslave him. From mean kid from the streets to domesticated doofus. I guess that's what passes for character development. I skipped ahead and Sunny is still eating Changing Star's dust after 750+ chapters. Effie basically says that he will never surpass Nephis.

You sure about that little dragon?

The weak to strong progression is not the issue. Readers didn't expect him to become a willing slave.

GOTA is Garden of The Abyss. Great novel but it was updated about a month ago.. Yea, I dropped Shadow Slave. What else you reading these days?

Yea, Sunny and Kai should come out of the closet already. It says #romance and this is the only romance after 460 chapters. 😂

Sunny had other options, but chose to team up with Cassie and Effie instead. Imagine being called doofus on a regular basis. No self-respecting guy would volunteer for that. Sunny is a simp and willing slave. There's nothing intriguing about that. I'm dropping it too.