Mythic_SilverWolf

it was a good read....we will see if i read it again...

this was an interesting read through....

absolutely fantastic i loved it....will read the rest when its out!

For instance at the end of paragraph one it says "Teacher Seraphina, I'll" then the rest of the sentence got pkaced in the next paragraph...."take the kids to go fishing by the stream later." But it was supposed to be "Teacher Seraphina, I'll take the kids to go fishing by the stream later."  I hope you see the error...Have a good day 😄😅

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good work so far but you have to pay attention to your spacing in between your words...for instance.....(ill quote it in a reply)

his stats are eighth rank i believe ..

i enjoyed it so far...so i will lok forward to more from this story

i will read this one day...but right now im trying to get the free fast passes but i promise I'll read it...

oooooo so interesting so far....keep up the good work 👍👍👍🙏🙏