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“Incredible, truly incredible, it’s so unfathomable it looks like chicken scratch to this old man. I can’t understand a thing!” - Attempting to read MTL.
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Chat GPT will probably reach something like that after running an API by devouring the entire internet for code and logic...
And 5000 Ryo is still equivalent to $50. Less than a video game for some, just a single meal for others.
The only pokémon movies I've ever seen was the first one with Mew/Mewtwo and I think the third one with Entei because it kept running on repeat on Cartoon Network... 20+ years have gone since I last looked into pokémon, I wonder if it'll be good ^^
5000 Ryo is actually pennies to a shinobi, and once they catch on to 'gain an ability'-part (if there's any realism) he'll get swarmed. 10 customers for a new comic? He'll empty out the worlds comics in a month lol
Such a rare thing to actually laugh to something you're reading, and this right here is exactly that. I've been writing an 'evil but humorous'-fic myself, but got caught some stomach virus, followed by the flu, which then ended up with covid - a whole 6 months away from my own story. And when I got back to write? My harddrive had died - all documents gone! HAHA! At any rate, give this one a shot. The premise of 'Child Emperor' almost made me ignore this story, and I'm extremely glad I didn't. Full pot of stars from me!
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Well, my intent by adding the slice-of-life tag is to do my best and retain the realism of the naruto world. We're 40+ chapters in, and in-world time it's been almost two weeks, haha... The potential the story I planned can run for about 1000 chapters, if it follows my draft - but I'm not sure I can keep going all the way. We're still very-very early into things, and I'm sorry it feels slow. :)
Rock Lee, someone younger than Kazuma in canon, already opened up to the fifth in battle against Gaara without major issues. Kazuma barely runs 2 gates and is deemed 'impressive', you tell me if it's discrediting Dai, Guy and Lee when my little Kazuma here is pretty darn terrible in comparison ^^
Transitioning back into the groove of things from the serious stuff~. Sorry you don't like it, I still remember what you said the last time such jokes showed up, and there aren't going to be many of them either way. Stick around, there won't be many of this type again~.
I'm afraid not, the Sharingan requires strong emotional agitation which a mosquito's "brain" simply does not have. ^^ Trying to keep it somewhat in line with realism, although difficult~! :)
I considered it sincerely, but I simply don't have enough material to even make a small Iwagakure arc. That part of the original is almost blank, and my skills are too weak~ to create my own to match the upcoming ideas I have. Hope you're still liking the story~!
This is my own story, but I have read plenty of other comedic works. Some jokes and set-ups can feel similar from something you've read elsewhere. I haven't written any other works like this before, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I will keep going until as far as I can! :)
I did try to piece together the story according to the timeline. Malaria is aged the same as Kakashi, both being aprox 5 years old nearing 6. Sakumo 'offs' himself when Kakashi is 6. Danzo having Sharingan from Tobirama's time is accurate. Danzo's arm already being a thing at this time, not certain. Mito is already dead at this point, but I wrote it poorly as if she's actually still around to condemn their actions. Meant to be told as 'if she knew, she'd turn in her grave'. I'm doing my best, trying to keep the inconsistency away~!