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2022-03-05 BeigetretenGlobal

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ReDore3 years ago
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The narrative power is great! The story has a decent pace to enjoy, but not very impactful to hook if using web novel as it is media. It would be better if it being published as a book.
Mind Linker
Fantasie · BlackSnowAngel
ReDore3 years ago
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Your narrative is so good, I can clearly see the picture here.
The other is someone who has been watching, testing him, giving him dark thoughts but at the same time pushing him forward telling him not to give up, giving him a direction, a goal. A contradiction that confuses him, but even still this presence that tells him. Go.
Mind Linker
Fantasie · BlackSnowAngel
ReDore3 years ago
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Sorry for shameless author review here. Hope you like the story and character I make, and this will be the first story that I mainly focused to write in this PF. Also, please show your support if you like it, hope you're well. ^^
God's Mercenary: Spirit Master
Fantasie · ReDore

God's Mercenary: Spirit Master

A spirit is no different from a human being, even if is one kind of ancient bond magic, there is a special condition to be able to be their master and that technique was long gone missing. Alev who repeatedly died in his reincarnation made him decide to try not to die and be reincarnated again to be able to complete his task from the otherworldly gods and find the cause of the chaos that occurred in the human world. With the help of power he got to control spirit elements, making him the last spirit's mage to go on an adventure to collect other spirit elements while steadily getting a piece of information guiding him to complete his tasks.

ReDore · Fantasie

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