The plot and storyline is good, although the writing style to messy to read. please fix that matters again. the rest is good. well, good job author.

please make the sentences more tidy so that readers can read them comfortably :3

good plot, good writing too. The introduction between the characters is also good, the rest just need to pay attention to grammar. good job author.

the names sounds foreign :3

turns out to be a romantic story between an older woman and a young man! The love between a famous idol and an ordinary woman is really interesting! I've added it to the library and will continue reading it again.

hi!

Sejauh ini bagus! Meski awalnya agak bertele-tele, tapi cukup bisa dinikmati~ Faerie, peri yang nyasar ke dunia novel~~~ Semoga kamu bisa menyelesaikan kontrak!