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With the chapters that have been published, you can get to know the characters pretty easily because the story is fast-paced which many readers appreciate. Once you've learned the names and the 'history' of the characters it makes it a lot easier to become invested. There is always a wanting to know more, "Why's he like this..', "Isn't he the guy who.." and that's an amazing aspect because I haven't been bored for a single moment. I will say though, every description the reader's given allows them to visualize exactly how the writer wishes the scene to take place and while that is an excellent quality in novels, it can be as much of an advantage as a disadvantage. I think if the aim is to have the reader imagine all the scenarios, it's done very well but with too much wording behind it. The descriptions are vivid but they can also be short and in the end, it should still create the image the author wishes to portray. Aside from that, I've found nothing in this story that has made me lose interest. I really enjoy it.