MoonBreath

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2022-03-02 BeigetretenGlobal

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MoonBreath2 years ago
Antwortet auf Pewkmon
why are you trying to compare irl to a fantasy novel?
He even tried becoming a beggar when people were around, but all he got in return was a kick in either his stomach or face.
Yin & Yang Monarch
Fantasie · MoonBreath
MoonBreath2 years ago
Antwortet auf Pewkmon
well this is my first time writing a novel, so not everything will make sense sorry, and the novels you see under are just tests
It was only after an unknown amount of time did they suddenly come to a stop, he quickly looked around him but all he could see was darkness, but he also saw stars that were really bright.
Yin & Yang Monarch
Fantasie · MoonBreath
MoonBreath2 years ago
Antwortet auf FWEA_JHITT
ah ur right, i will update it
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Yin & Yang Monarch
Fantasie · MoonBreath
MoonBreath2 years ago
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This might be confusing but i will try to explain it the best i can later in the novel
The user has power over yin and yang, the natural and spiritual dualities of polar opposites or seemingly contrary forces that are interconnected and interdependent in the natural world and how they give rise to each other in turn in relation to each other. With many distinct natural dualities e.g., dark and light, female and male, low and high, cold and hot, water and fire, earth and air—are thought of as manifestations of yin and yang (respectively).
Yin & Yang Monarch
Fantasie · MoonBreath
MoonBreath2 years ago
Antwortet auf SpideyNova
yea I still need a lot of improvements and editing in my writing, and yea I don't plan to make the mc human at all
Ch 2 Two Beings
Yin & Yang Monarch
Fantasie · MoonBreath
MoonBreath3 years ago
Antwortet auf Leo_Wood_1125
Yes I am
Ch 1 New beginnings
Cosmic Deity
Fantasie · MoonBreath
MoonBreath3 years ago
Antwortet auf JSKOPOP
thank you
Ch 6 New Abilities
Cosmic Deity
Fantasie · MoonBreath
MoonBreath3 years ago
Antwortet auf Fi3l
Yea I said that in the second chapter, and don't worry he'll be a ruthless, Psychopathic killer;)
Ch 2 Explaining
Cosmic Deity
Fantasie · MoonBreath
MoonBreath3 years ago
Kommentiert
#596 is the closest reference I could use so you can see her outfit, think of the hoodie more bigger and covers her face so all you see is black.
...Eventually I found a perfect outfit and I was surprised at how good it was, it was all black and it has a coat attached to it. The stomach area was a bit revealing but some how I had a feeling she wouldn't really care.
Life At The End Of Death
Fantasie · MoonBreath
MoonBreath3 years ago
Antwortet auf kuro_mortem
oh uh sorry I was trying to figure out a way to explain it the best way I can, I'm a new author
To begin with Arcane power is a mixture of 3 things, Mana, Magic, and Gods Aura these 3 form a perfect harmony and created a whole now energy called "Arcane". The person who found and created this was no other than your mother. But that was trillions of light years ago.
Life At The End Of Death
Fantasie · MoonBreath

Yin & Yang Monarch

Zach, a kid who was abandoned by his parents whom he didn't even know, left to fend for himself at the little age of only 8 he had no survival instincts and could only live in the slums living off leftovers inside garbage cans, That is until one day when he was about to die from hunger, he suddenly saw a white and black light envelope his body and snatched him out of his body with only his body being left behind. He travelled through an endless space where his senses couldn't keep up with the speed, when suddenly he stopped in the middle of space where he saw to being floating in the air, they had no facial features or any features at all, the only difference was that one was was glowing white, and the other was a deep black, Once he met these two being, his life changed for the better...

MoonBreath · Fantasie

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15 Chs

Cosmic Deity

Born in a world run by supernatural powers that was run by the law of the jungle, but abandoned by his unknown parents in a facility when he was born for money, he grew up only experimented on and always remained in a all white empty room and only wore all white clothing, he was a clueless kid and all he knew was pain of needles constantly stabbing him for experiments, whilst also being put in water filled pods for days straight being tested on, But one day, a reckless experiment the scientists performed on him made him to die slowly in extreme pain, just as he was about to take his last breathe thinking he was going to die, a weird ray of light was brought to his dead eyes and a mysterious person appeared before him...

MoonBreath · Fantasie

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15 Chs

Life At The End Of Death

A young boy born in a world of cultivation and magic, the world was ruthless too people without power and would throw away anyone who couldn't achieve power. Everyone wanted to ascend to godhood for eternal life and beauties by there side. The young boy was born with a dangerous power that he couldn't control no matter how much he tried, he was taken too a lab facility and was given the name, Code 014...15 years later he made an escape after many experiments done to him but unfortuantely he couldn't come out alive...

MoonBreath · Fantasie

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21 Chs