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Hello, I'm rather a new writer so I make some mistakes. But you don't have to worry about this particular one, the girl isn't a romantic interest. She serves a purpose way later in the plot.
Some concepts, notably the “extra is a mafia” concept was inspired by it. I think the only thing similar is the Corleone name, which is a real life thing and from the Godfather. Also the Club system which I really liked and changed a few things about it. Is there a problem?
Indomitable Spirit is not a skill. It's a natural born talent.