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Thanks, for your feedback, as for the dead bodies you asked for, as I explained in the first chapter only desperate people were forced to make a breakthrough which means they have no one to rely on. Even if they have a family this is a cultivation world, their families know that they might not return.

mc is behaving contradictory to his on belief as he thinks he is not real prince so he has nothing to do with royal family but remember that one of his brother good to real prince so he helps him become the king but he doesn't even meet the the real prince mother as he has no feelings for real prince mother....... Really?

story is not consistent and it is full of loopholes,and there is another auction system novel some things are directly taken from there ....

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complete b.s. In middle of the novel it changed in to a copy of other novel. Just copy and paste nothing more. .............................

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first few chapters were ok but latter it became a complete trashy novel. MC working for govt that just ruined the novel. can't read it anymore.....

story is developing a little too fast and information about characters is not well presented. Sometimes it seems like something is missing because of the gaps.