I like writing it because it lets me use my imagination to create a story where no one has ever been before. ☕ Currently working on my books: The Ash Earth, Nocs, and D.no
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Hi, what are you confused about? The flow of the story?
Hi, you're right this was at the wrong chapter - this is actually at chapter 25 titled Silver Bear. My apologies.
Thanks! It's really encouraging to see reviews like yours! Will work hard on this :D
Glad the plot and concept took your interest :D Hope you enjoy it!
Thanks for the support!
Thanks alot for showing the love <3 Haha! I'll keep up the hard work. Really appreciate you for showing up in the comments!
Thanks for your feedback. I think so too - it was 3,100 words and so much more than what I wanted to write. So for now, I've kept the prologue but moved it into a chapter of it's own. So that if others wants to they can skip straight to the real first chapter. The prologue helps me and some other as a setup so I hope that this will keep the pacing. :D Appreciate your comment!
I like the MC, I mean most of the character is well designed. I haven't caught up to the latest chapter but I do enjoy a bit of the suspense. The tension is there and it provide some expectation to what's gonna happen. Looking forward to how to story develop :D
Your character and their development are fascinating to read, and I'm inquisitive about how the character will develop more in the future. I enjoy the genre but would like to know more about what the college in this story is like?